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Anyone want to critique a novel?

Flame Girl
I'm looking at the Harper Voyager E-book Open Submissions and plan to submit one of my unsold manuscripts. It needs a fresh set of eyes to look it over and say what works/doesn't, and possibly to suggest a way to tighten up the ending. Also, it may need more scope. (It's a fantasy novel with one hero and two heroines, of the "survivors of an attack band together and work to enact revenge" flavor. There may need to be more about the various cultures to make it read more like epic fantasy.) It also currently has quite a bit of sex in it. I'd be interested in hearing another take on if some of that should be cut or minimized.

So, any takers?

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jmward14
Sep. 8th, 2012 03:08 am (UTC)
I'm the world's worst critiquer. But you've got all my very best wishes on the submission.
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